I am a student. This is a place where I will share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Tuesday, 29 May 2018
Writing - Term 2
Maddy is learning to re-read her writing to check it sounds right and looks right as well as adding detail to her work.
Maddy your description "...it shines brightly in the night sky" is beautiful. "Twinkling" is a great choice of word too. Well done!
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